green trees
freshly laundered
wet leaves
waterdropletshanging
reflecting
a smile
a wet smile
i held his hand
walked
in the rain
wet hands
the grass beneath
caressed
a wet kiss
drenched
sticky
wet bones
loving it
wet love
wet
completely wet....
Clever Girl Writes Books.
9 years ago
4 comments:
fresh. warm. loved.
wet.
louwe it. :)
dear amu:::
"louwe" it? i presume ..or rather i hope it means "love" it... thanks so much.. glad to kno that wet feels good for u also!! :)
i love the "waterdropletshanging"
its so beautiful. i can see the umpteen number of water drops hanging on to a bough....lovely.
your poems read like the same...red and wet...too similar for them to be two poems, except for the theme....would be nice if you try a slight variation next time... :)
:::dear vrinda:::
i gather u r a fellow rain lover... i m glad.... :)
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