Saturday, October 04, 2008

wet


green trees
freshly laundered
wet leaves

waterdropletshanging
reflecting
a smile
a wet smile

i held his hand
walked
in the rain
wet hands

the grass beneath
caressed
a wet kiss

drenched
sticky
wet bones

loving it
wet love

wet
completely wet....



4 comments:

Amu said...

fresh. warm. loved.
wet.

louwe it. :)

The Mind Bedouin said...

dear amu:::
"louwe" it? i presume ..or rather i hope it means "love" it... thanks so much.. glad to kno that wet feels good for u also!! :)

Anamika said...

i love the "waterdropletshanging"
its so beautiful. i can see the umpteen number of water drops hanging on to a bough....lovely.

your poems read like the same...red and wet...too similar for them to be two poems, except for the theme....would be nice if you try a slight variation next time... :)

The Mind Bedouin said...

:::dear vrinda:::
i gather u r a fellow rain lover... i m glad.... :)