Sunday, September 14, 2008

mooned...



i am mooned
i am obsessed...

last night
saw
i

clear night
stars
breeze
cold
so warm

bright bright bright
moon

wegazedtogether

spoke
of
childhood
growing up
friendship
romance
life

mooned

beautiful

silence
companionship
understanding
unspoken all of it

mooned
i am

4 comments:

The Mind Bedouin said...

i know its dumb to comment on it myself... but i just wanted to tell those who read this that this is one of my most favourite poems i have written...i love the poem for wat it is... but i love it more for the memories attached... guess ill never forget it.. :)

Sonal Dhiman said...

might i seek permission to join the list of people who love this poem.
loved it completely.
if worth the effort and trouble would u mind sharing the inspiration behind this piece?

The Mind Bedouin said...

:::dear sonal:::
i am soo happy you loved it. i was actually little sad nobody had commented on it.. he he...

The Mind Bedouin said...

oh and ya... this piece came right after i finished talkin to a very dear person in the night... of the one hour we spent together, we spent 45 minutes being mesmerised by the moon...
besides, i am a cancerian.. my ruling planet is the moon.. how can not write anything about it then.. :) we cancerians are supposed to be at our best in the presence of a full moon... and no, we are not werewolves! so, right after basking in the silver of a very full moon, i wrote this! and that is why it makes me so happy to kno other people liked it!