Monday, March 23, 2009

mai best frend...


Her naime is Koel. She s 19 yers old...tre yers yungr t me... but we ar best frends... she levs t saime boks as I do..ar favrit bok s 'totochan'... my moma yused t reed it fur mi.. ar musik taists difer tho... she levs rok! i haite it...

oooh... but she s reel fun... she kin maike u laf.. kry... just as it soots her... n i cant eva furgit t taimes wen she has bin ther fur mi..

loog taime bak, no won yused t tok t mi..everywon yused t say i wes mad... den she caime... she wes .. no.. is d best...

evun today sumbudy throo stons at mi.. they also tide things t my skirt .. n i maide loud souns wen i walkt.. they laf at mi.. i yused to kry.. a loot.. eerlier.. but nouw i m faine... i hav u .. so wot if they cant see yu.. so wat if they tink i am tokin t nobody.. so wat if they tink i m mad...

i don caire.. i hav yu.. mai best frend...

7 comments:

vrinda said...

WOW!!! i mean WOW!! totally bowled over madam!!

interminable twaddlings said...

extremely good use of language.. twisted but marvellous

Shweta said...

The technique is awesome. But i think narrative could be a little better. I could be wrong. :)

Have you read The Bluest Eye? I think you'll like it.

*Because i couldn't wait.:)*

The Mind Bedouin said...

:::dear vrinda:::

i m glad i bowled YOU over... finallY!!!!

The Mind Bedouin said...

:::dear i.t:::
thanks a bunch.... keep visiting my humble abode!

The Mind Bedouin said...

:::dear shweta:::

**finally!!!!

and i have read the bluest eye... but i dont remember much of it...
i'll try n better my way of writing.. a great singer once said.. "music is an ocean, and i am just a little boy, standing in awe at the shore.."
fearing copyright issues, i guess ill adopt that quote for myself... and add "writing" to it..

So said...

touching...